100 Word Challenge Week #11

Bang, Bang, Bang as the gunshots were let off in the distance. It was a really hot day in Gallipoli when Australia and Afghanistan went to war, more gunshots were let off. Suddenly screams came from a sand dune, I ran over to see what was going on, someone got shot and the nurses took him away, sadly he was my mate. Monday the 11th of November is Remembrance Day, Remembrance Day is when Australia remembers the soldiers that went to war. They sacrificed their lives for Australia and we should remember them. Wear a poppy, say Lest We Forget.


100 Word Challenge Week #10

After a long hot summer in the UK the rain as finally come. Rose Kingston was taking a long walk in the rain with a rain coat and gumboots on, splashing in the puddles as she went back home from school. Rose didn’t know that the schools meanest bully Tim Duster was following her home. Tim ran up and grabbed Rose by the feet carried her to an old broken drain and stuffed her head into the hole until all you could see was her gumboots. Rose was struggling for air but she couldn’t take it anymore and sadly died.



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100 Word Challenge Week #9

Crash went a big clap of thunder as the rain trickled down from the roof to the garden; it was all dark outside and really spooky. I heard a clap of thunder again and ran under the table with all of toys and blankets. My cat was under the table too. There was a flash of lightning outside that light up the room. Then suddenly the power went out. The violent storm was so scary and I have never been in a storm as bad as this and especially on Halloween the spookiest night of the year. I’m so scared.


CSI vs Reality

The CSI people have in their labs dim blue lights like on the TV. They have less light in the labs which is harder to look at the fingerprints. They always jump to conclusions like when they find two fingerprints that match they say we got the culprit. They rush their investigations an don’t go into good detail, they have really high tech gadgets like on the TV that you will not find in real labs and they have less people in the lab then real life.The reality scientist have bright lights in their labs so they can see and do the investigation properly. They need lots of light because if you have lots of light in the lab it will help you more because it is brighter than the dim lights in CSI. In reality they use lots of DNA samples because it gets them closer to finding the culprit of a crime. In reality the language is different to CSI because reality say similar to while CSI say a pair. Reality take there time in there investigations because they want to get everything right and to get as much evidence as possible to help them. Reality work as a team and they have more people in the lab then CSI. Some things that they both have in common are they use most of the same equipment. Eg: microscopes. They use the same methods for investigating and they both take photographs.

100 Word Challenge Week #8

My scary character is called Daniel the demon. Daniel the demon can blow fire and it can burn anyone’s skin off their body. He is mean and his always getting up to naughty things like blowing people’s houses down and throwing fire balls at them. He lives at the Night Zoo in a small corner of the gift shop which is made at of stone. His room is full of poster of the meanest demon of all time. Daniel wants to enter a competition called who is the meanest demon of all time. He has a pet called Digger Dog.