100 Word Challenge Week #14

On a warm summer’s night in Mexico, a girl named Zara was going into bed. At 11 o’ clock, she woke to the sound of slipping, gripping and sliding outside her bedroom window. At 12 o’ clock, she woke to the same sound as before but it sounded closer and then the noise stopped. She eventually drifted off to sleep but woke again at 3 o’clock to the annoying sound, she looked out the window and saw a shadow, and she quickly grabbed her slippers and went outside to her window and saw a dead body and lots of blood.

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Hi my name is Zoe and I am in Year 5. In my family is Mum, Dad, my sister Sammi and me. I have a gorgeous cat called Ghostie. She is about 2 years old and I really love her. My favourite sport is swimming. Some of my friends are Hannah, Bill, Jessie, Sozoe and Paris.

One thought on “100 Word Challenge Week #14

  1. An interesting start to a mystery story. Take care with your tenses as ‘was going’ in the first sentence and then past tense in your next sentence makes it a bit confusing.

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